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Eyes deep and beautiful
More so than a clear nights sky
With the crescent moon
Casting a warm, soft glow over the earth
As warm and soft as are your lips
And with an almost equivalent beauty
The earth, from space
Appears attempting to return such radiance
Failing though, with only few bright spots
Most of the surface smudged in darkness
Try, as I am, I still fall short
I'm trying to shine like my moon
Both inside and out
Still lonely spots
Both inside and out
©2009 ~last2throw
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well well, let's see... i was feeling a little..."emo" that day, lonely and....well dark, not evil, just... idk... ugly i guess is the only word i can think, anywya hear what came out, personally i like it, but let's you be the judge 'eh?

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:iconmichiruko:
No misspellings in sight. ^^

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We’re all meant for heaven but we’re aiming to hell. -[link]
:iconlast2throw:
^_^ yayz

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Live today, Yesterday is Past, Tomorrow is not yet here, Today is here but will soon pass, Live it
:iconbowen13:
Why do I feel like I've read this before? Strange...

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The degeneration of generosity
Is the prelude to animosity.

I shall stand as a stalwart remnant,
And if the Lord be for me, and the world against me,
Then woe be to the world.
:iconlast2throw:
lol sry it was a repost lol i didn't notice till after the post... i got rid of the other one lol

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Live today, Yesterday is Past, Tomorrow is not yet here, Today is here but will soon pass, Live it

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